The Shoes At The Door
The hospital visits drained their savings. The aunties stopped coming. The noise around them faded, until it was just the two of them.

Olutayo, Oluwasetemi lives in Ibadan, Oyo. TYWA stories may be slightly edited for grammatical accuracy and to better serve TGF readers. The originality of the story is 100% intact. - TYWA 2025

Every morning at 5:30 a.m., Mr. Bamidele’s shoes sat neatly by the front door. Polished. Facing out. Ready.


Even though he hadn’t worn them in three years.


Sade, his daughter, saw them every day on her way out to work. She never touched them. Never moved them. They were like a quiet ritual—there to remind her that something was missing, but also that something had once been there.


Her father used to be the kind of man who whistled through problems. Who read the newspaper aloud like the headlines were jokes meant just for the family. Who made toast with peanut butter and sardines and called it a “rich man’s breakfast.”


Then came the stroke.


One half of his body forgot how to move. The other half forgot how to smile.


Sade postponed law school for a year. Then another. The hospital visits drained their savings. The aunties stopped coming. The noise around them faded, until it was just the two of them. Him in silence. Her in motion.


She took a remote job, learned to make his medications a routine, and cooked meals she wasn’t sure he could still taste. Some days, he blinked in recognition. Others, he stared at her like she was a stranger in a home that used to be his.


One evening, as rain tapped on the zinc roof, Sade sat beside him, tired and worn.


“You know,” she whispered, “your shoes still wait for you.”


No reply. Just the hum of the old standing fan.


Then—softly—he blinked twice.


That was how they’d agreed on “yes” during rehab. Two blinks.


She blinked back at him, fighting tears.


The next morning, the shoes weren’t by the door.


She panicked. Searched the house. Until she found them—on his lap, in his wheelchair, his good hand resting gently on the laces.


No words. No speech.


Just a look.


He was trying.


He remembered.


That day, she made two cups of tea and sat with him longer than usual. They listened to the rain together. Not as patient and caregiver. Not as broken man and burdened daughter.


But as father and child—relearning presence.


The shoes stayed by his side after that. Not as a memory of what was lost, but as a quiet promise of what still remained.

A tender meditation on memory, loss, and the small rituals that tether us to love. With prose as polished as the shoes it describes, this story lingers like a whispered goodbye, and a hopeful hello.
-Sola Soyele
"The Shoes at the Door" is a masterfully understated piece that captures the quiet ache of caregiving and the enduring bond between a father and daughter. The author’s restraint is its strength - each sentence is deliberate, each image evocative. The shoes become a powerful symbol: of memory, of hope, of the fragile thread that connects past and present. The story doesn’t shout; it whispers, and in that whisper lies its emotional power. With poetic pacing and cinematic detail, this story invites the reader to sit in stillness, to feel the weight of love, loss, and the small victories that make healing possible. It’s a beautiful meditation on presence, patience, and the quiet language of resilience.
-TGF Team
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