Ashes
She bites her lip, worry increasing with each buzz of her phone.

Erhiakeme, Pamela lives in Ovwian, Delta. TYWA stories may be slightly edited for grammatical accuracy and to better serve TGF readers. The originality of the story is 100% intact. - TYWA 2025

The professor is staring Ada down. Ada tries to keep a straight face, not meeting his eyes as she casually scribbles circles in her jotter. Her phone vibrates in her pocket for the fifth time. Buzz-buzz. She’s sitting upright, her head mechanically going up and down to display a faux concentration, but her mind is on the vibrating device in her pocket. Shouldn’t the caller know that she’s in class?


The lecture goes on for half an hour after that. Her phone rings three more times. She bites her lip, worry increasing with each buzz of her phone. Who could be calling her incessantly?


The moment the lecturer walks out, Ada grabs her phone. The missed calls are from her younger brother, Ebuka. He is the only one in their family house, as she is in the university writing her semester exams and their parents are on a business trip.


Ebuka sent her a message: “Please come home fast. Gas is leaking.”


Worry runs through her veins and grips her chest. She tries calling Ebuka back, but he doesn’t pick up. En route back to Warri, she calls everyone – Mama, Papa, Mr Okon (their landlord), Mummy Ayo (their neighbour). No one responds.


Ada returns home to see a crowd of people in front of the heap of ashes where their house formerly stood. No one says a word to her. No words need to be said. The ashes, the smoke in the air, the soot covering bystanders – they all speak the unsaid words. The smell of roasted bodies conveys reality.


She scans the crowd for a young boy whose complexion is as dark as molasses. He wears glasses too big for his face, with front teeth too big for his mouth. She loves that boy, would’ve given up everything for him. He is supposed to run towards her, arms wide open to embrace her as he shouts, “Sister Ada! Sister Ada! Welcome back!”


Yet the only sound she hears is buzz-buzz. The vibration of her phone echoes in her head, a memento of her brother. Buzz-buzz.


The sound that comes out of her lips is raw and guttural, and Ada sinks to the ground and cries.

There is something quietly devastating about Ashes. It is a story that does not shout, yet it echoes. The prose is spare, almost deceptively simple, but beneath that simplicity lies a profound emotional weight. What I find most compelling is the way the story captures the ordinariness of catastrophe. How life can be humming along, with vibrating phones and scribbled circles in jotters, and then, in a moment, everything is reduced to soot. What I admire most is that the story does not try to resolve grief. It does not offer comfort. It simply allows Ada to collapse, to cry, to feel. And in doing so, it gives the reader permission to feel too.
-Sola Soyele
"Ashes" is a hauntingly poignant short story that captures the fragility of life and the suddenness of loss with devastating clarity. The narrative is tightly woven, with a slow-burning tension that crescendos into heartbreak.
-TGF Team
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